Speech about Jeep

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I'm 15 so I'm still in School and I'm taking speech this year, I decided to write my speech about the history of the Jeep, cuz WHY NOT
so here's my rough draft, Im still working on it so don't judge, BTW it supposed to be around 9 mins

any pointers would be help fun

enjoy!

Thesis: Jeep is more than just a car brand



The year was 1940, the USA was feeling the effects World War 2, Realizing that this war would not spare anyone they started to accumulate supplies, one thing that they were lacking in the previous war was efficient ground transportation, that was one thing that was needed in this war due to its size and modern weaponry, a message was sent to 135 car companies, the army needed a working prototype of a 4wd reconnaissance vehicle in 49 days, only 1 company made the dead line, that company was Bantam, they presented a 4x4 car that made the specifications that the army had, but when the army put in an order for the cars bantam realized they didn’t have nearly the resources to make all of them, due to this the army sent the blueprints of Bantams car to Ford, and Willys Overland, the army would then chose which car they preferred and have the companies produce those cars. Ford presented the Pygmy, and Willys Overland the Quad, the army chose the Willys Quad due to it being lighter and more powerful,

The Willys MB as it was officially named helped tremendously in the war, approximately 650,000 Of Willys cars were made, many were sent to Americas allies in the war to help out. Field modifications were endless, from VIP limousines to artillery platforms, garbage trucks to messenger service or rapid strike assault vehicles the MB could be outfitted for virtually anything, it served very well as a medical vehicle, wounded soldiers were 10X more likely to survive in the 2nd world war verses the 1st due to the Jeeps that would travel to the front lines, pick them up and bring them to the medical camps. I realize that you may be wondering why I keep calling them Jeeps even though they are technically called the Willys MB, there are many ideas as to where the name came from, some think that it came from the Armies previous use of the word Jeep as a name for new recruits, others think it came from Fords model of the Jeep called the GP, still others think it’s from the show Popeye the sailor, where Popeye gets a pet cat/dog hybrid named Eugene the Jeep that is famous for being able to go anywhere much like the Jeep, The first time the public saw the 4×4 car was when it was driven up the steps of the U.S. Capitol. When a curious audience asked what the vehicle was, the driver said, “It’s a Jeep.” Willys Overland filed a trademark application two years later. Nearing the end of the war Willys Overland started thinking about what they would sell after the war ended, now before the war Willys Overland mainly produced passenger cars, but during the war most of their factories were converted to make the MB, this was a problem, obviously, because the war wouldn’t last forever and that means that the army wouldn’t need cars anymore till the next war and the public sure wouldn’t want to buy a tactical war machine, so Willys decided to adapt the MB to be more “Civilian Friendly”. Willys overland released their first Civilian Jeep, or CJ in 1945, the CJ-2A had larger headlights, a tire mounted on the cars side, a tailgate and a higher windshield, including extra equipment such as a rear seat, center rear view mirror, front passenger seat, canvas top, snow plow, welder, generator, mower disc, heavy duty springs, dual taillights, hot-climate radiator, driveshaft guards, heater, side steps, and radiator brush guard, and whole bunch of other stuff unfortunately it didn’t sell very well, it was rough on the road and overall not very appealing to the general public, In 1949 the CJ-3A was released and it had better seats, more leg room and a host of other creature comforts for the average daily driver, unfortunately this didn’t help sales like they had hoped, Willys-overland was going Downhill fast, things just weren’t going right.

Enter Henry J. Kaiser, Henry Kaiser owned ship building company and he wanted to start a car company, but he knew that he couldn’t compete with the larger car companies like Ford and Chevy, He wanted to buy Willys-Overland and he promised to continue to using the Willys badging on the cars, The first Jeep sold under Kaiser’s ownership was the now iconic CJ5, it had much more rounded corners and a refined interior, sales for the CJ5 along with the CJ6 started in 1955, The 50s were what some consider the start of Jeep culture, the Jeep Jamboree is a very popular Jeep event where many Jeep owners come together for some trail rides, it was started by Mark A. Smith In 1953, he and a bunch of fellow Jeep owners drove the Rubicon trail in the Sierra-Nevada mountains, from then on the annual crossing of the Rubicon trail has become a tradition for Jeep enthusiasts.

even though the CJ5 sold pretty well, the Henry Kaisers endeavor still lost money, Jeep found it very difficult to keep afloat in the car industry. Kaiser knew they needed a better foothold in the car industry so they got in touch with the American Motor Company or AMC, who was looking for a more utilitarian vehicle to round out there more performance orientated vehicles, now Kaiser Jeep was already using a few AMC engines at this point so merging the 2 companies wasn’t unheard of, so in 1970 Kaiser sold the Jeep brand to AMC. The first Jeep designed and sold under by AMC was the CJ7, this car was an immediate sale success. It had a 10 inch longer wheel base and was overall comfier.



Around the year 1980, a 60 minutes segment by the Insurance Institute for Highway Safety
was aired, it stated that the CJ5 (which was still in production at this point) was apt to roll over even at speeds as low as 20mph in a parking lot, this hurt sales for the CJ5 and eventually led to it along with the CJ7 being discontinued due to the lack of sales, it was revealed years later that it took 435 tries to get it to roll 8 times, what makes it crazier is that there where weights hidden under the fenders where the camera couldn’t see, to ensure that it was “worst case scenario” even to this day I hear people say that you should be very careful driving a Jeep because they can easily roll, all because of a fake rollover test, by 1986 Jeep, was not doing well, law suites due to the faked rollover test were costing them lots of money, as was tradition by now the Jeep name was handed from 1 struggling company to another, this time it was bought by Chrysler, Chrysler immediately released the all new Jeep YJ Wrangler, (this was the first time it was released under the wrangler name) it was an almost total redesign of the CJ, it had more rear occupant protection, softer suspension, larger engine, and many more things, the most noticeable difference was the head lights, they were square, this angered many Jeep fans, every Jeep since the original MB had circle headlights, another noticeable thing about the YJ was that it sat lower and wider than the CJ, this improved on road handling and comfort,
 
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I like what you've written so far. My comments are;

1) Work on punctuation and spelling. I'm assuming high school teachers have the same standards as they did in the last century :)

2) I don't think you have 10 minutes worth of material. Include all models such as TJ, JK, and JL.
 
I like what you've written so far. My comments are;

1) Work on punctuation and spelling. I'm assuming high school teachers have the same standards as they did in the last century :)

2) I don't think you have 10 minutes worth of material. Include all models such as TJ, JK, and JL.
yeah I forgot to mention that i'm going to eventually mention the newer wranglers

thanks for the advice
 
I like what you've written so far. My comments are;

1) Work on punctuation and spelling. I'm assuming high school teachers have the same standards as they did in the last century :)

2) I don't think you have 10 minutes worth of material. Include all models such as TJ, JK, and JL.
also its supposed to be not OVER 10 minutes, more around 9 mins
 
Sorry for the wall of text in advance.
Nothing wrong with going with what you wrote, you have a good flowing story.

When I was taught how to write it kinda went like this:

Paragraph: introduction - state your whole idea and list three things that prove your point, make a conclusion
Paragraph: point one
Paragraph: point two
Paragraph: point three
Paragraph: conclusion -repeat your intro different words citing all three points

Maybe you could go based on impact
Jeeps are more than a car brand
- They helped win a war
- They represent freedom and outdoors
- They have a history that spans generations

Or you can tell a history based on a timeline
Jeep has always been more than a car brand
- The wartime Jeeps 1940-1945
- Postwar Jeep Civilian Jeep Boom 1945-1985
- Modern Jeeps the Wrangler era 1986-current

Teachers like that structure. It is very simple and repeating key things makes people remember what you are talking about. It's also easy to build on once you have a good framework or outline.

When you get something written read it to a person, set a timer and put it in your pocket. Check it when you're done and adjust, people tend to cheat when they are reading to themselves. If you are allowed a cheat sheet or something to read from write PAUSE in big freaking letters between paragraphs so you remember to take a breath. If you make a joke write JOKE in big letters so you remember to smile and look up and wait for the laugh.

I've heard people fear public speaking more than sharks with laser beams so good luck with whatever you come up with and it's great you picked Jeep.
 
Sorry for the wall of text in advance.
Nothing wrong with going with what you wrote, you have a good flowing story.

When I was taught how to write it kinda went like this:

Paragraph: introduction - state your whole idea and list three things that prove your point, make a conclusion
Paragraph: point one
Paragraph: point two
Paragraph: point three
Paragraph: conclusion -repeat your intro different words citing all three points

Maybe you could go based on impact
Jeeps are more than a car brand
- They helped win a war
- They represent freedom and outdoors
- They have a history that spans generations

Or you can tell a history based on a timeline
Jeep has always been more than a car brand
- The wartime Jeeps 1940-1945
- Postwar Jeep Civilian Jeep Boom 1945-1985
- Modern Jeeps the Wrangler era 1986-current

Teachers like that structure. It is very simple and repeating key things makes people remember what you are talking about. It's also easy to build on once you have a good framework or outline.

When you get something written read it to a person, set a timer and put it in your pocket. Check it when you're done and adjust, people tend to cheat when they are reading to themselves. If you are allowed a cheat sheet or something to read from write PAUSE in big freaking letters between paragraphs so you remember to take a breath. If you make a joke write JOKE in big letters so you remember to smile and look up and wait for the laugh.

I've heard people fear public speaking more than sharks with laser beams so good luck with whatever you come up with and it's great you picked Jeep.
thanks for the advice
 
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My advice is to learn what you want to talk about and throw the papers in the trash. Learn to give your speeches off the cuff.

I did this through speech at the college level. I wanted to get comfortable in talking to an audience so I’d research a topic and never pre-write the speech. Walk in and have a conversation with the audience and it’s helped me grow and be able to interact with others while under pressure.
 
My advice is to learn what you want to talk about and throw the papers in the trash. Learn to give your speeches off the cuff.

I did this through speech at the college level. I wanted to get comfortable in talking to an audience so I’d research a topic and never pre-write the speech. Walk in and have a conversation with the audience and it’s helped me grow and be able to interact with others while under pressure.
I wish I could do that, its a organized thing and they check homework each week,
 
I did hundreds of presentations to engineers and senior business executives. Practice with someone who likes you and won't laugh when you make a mistake. Put in some periods - they tell you when to breathe. Finally, IBM used to have a great saying regarding giving a talk:
1. Tell them what you are going to tell them (introduction)
2. Tell them. (body)
3. Tell them what you just told them (conclusion)

Have fun!
 
I actually wrote my senior speech on a very similar topic. It kind of starts out similar as yours. The only difference is mine has about 22 minutes of material..... If you want me to send it to you PM me and you can look at it and get some ideas.
 
To be an effective speaker you need to get and hold peoples interest. Although the topic may be of interest to some, it will not be to most. What if you flip this on its head? Don't make the speech about the history of the Jeep. Instead, make it about why you are interested in a Jeep, how it makes you feel, and what you've learned as a result of having one. Seems like there is a lot of interesting material there!

As always, just a thought!
 
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My advice is to learn what you want to talk about and throw the papers in the trash. Learn to give your speeches off the cuff.

I did this through speech at the college level. I wanted to get comfortable in talking to an audience so I’d research a topic and never pre-write the speech. Walk in and have a conversation with the audience and it’s helped me grow and be able to interact with others while under pressure.
That’s some advanced level advice…probably wouldn’t start there.

In college I would research the hell out of the topic and then use an outline during the presentation to help me stay on track. Like Apparition said, if you know the information then all you need are key words to jog your memory. Trying to remember 9 minutes word for word is tough and reading without looking at your audience is poor form.

I’d go through your speech and break it down into outline form. Then use that as a guide.
 
I actually wrote my senior speech on a very similar topic. It kind of starts out similar as yours. The only difference is mine has about 22 minutes of material..... If you want me to send it to you PM me and you can look at it and get some ideas.
yes please, that would be great!